Tuesday, April 21, 2020
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Hi Sophia,
ReplyDeleteI have just read you story, about Lily. You have used some really great adjectives, especially ones like humongous and crashing. It really makes the story so exciting to read. I am pleased her parents found her in the end. What other stories have your read?
Thank you, at the moment I am reading James and the Giant Peach.
ReplyDeleteHi Sophia
ReplyDeleteWell done on finishing your writing. I really like how you have highlighted the adjectives, this made it easy for the reader to see where your extra description is. I agree with Mrs Wright - very pleased to see she found her parents in the end.
Miss Gill.
Good job Sophia. Love from Zoe
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